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Author: trinityfinger
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outside, a flustered shade of ivory keys
mistuned: the harmonies of europe

don't permeate here, don't sew the earth
with fulsome seams: allegro, a cavatina

for a castrato, intermezzo for this day:
sit inside and drink the shade

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