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    dots Submission Name: scordaturadots

    Author: trinityfinger
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    outside, a flustered shade of ivory keys
    mistuned: the harmonies of europe

    don't permeate here, don't sew the earth
    with fulsome seams: allegro, a cavatina

    for a castrato, intermezzo for this day:
    sit inside and drink the shade

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