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    dots Submission Name: Just Remember dots

    Author: SweetAndOhSoME
    ASL Info:    17/f/Here
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 300/112/77
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsJust Remember dots

    Just remember who stood there waiting patiently
    For you to stumble
    but never laughed.
    Even when you were parading
    insistent that you'd never fumble
    or your plans were too staffed
    to find room for another.
    Just remember.
    From every day,
    January to December,
    you might've ignored
    a friend
    Because you were bored,
    Or maybe didn't know what to say,
    Just too busy,
    And there's not enough time in the day.

    Submitted on 2014-01-10 03:21:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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