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Just Remember

Author: SweetAndOhSoME
ASL Info:    17/f/Here
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Just a quick write.

Just Remember

Just remember who stood there waiting patiently
For you to stumble
but never laughed.
Even when you were parading
insistent that you'd never fumble
or your plans were too staffed
to find room for another.
Just remember.
From every day,
January to December,
you might've ignored
a friend
Because you were bored,
Or maybe didn't know what to say,
Just too busy,
And there's not enough time in the day.

Submitted on 2014-01-10 03:21:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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