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    dots Submission Name: who am i living for?dots
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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 41/55/47
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswho am i living for?dots
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    I cant think, am I doing this for someone else
    or is this what Im meant to be
    will i become the things I crave
    Or is that just a fantasy
    Addicted to bright lights and rap music
    Vegas here tonight, cant ever get enough
    With love on my mind
    the night feels kinda rough




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