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    dots Submission Name: Transformation©™ dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 931
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Transformation, wolf , howling , moon , hunt


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    Love & Tame this powerful beast
    Transform me, Giving me strength ,
    Or just Reveil my human weakness

    Your eyes show so much depth, So True
    ...I See so much promise for us , (in you)

    Will our fears hold us back ?
    Will our past block us from stepping forward?

    Insecurity's are , our daily dreams
    ( nothing is what it seems )
    My Nightmares i want to scream ...

    Unleash this inner beast
    Untie me from this wire cage
    (set me free, )

    The Damned leash
    Now dismantled in-front of me

    I Lunge into your arms
    Hungry like the wolf ,
    Howling at the midnight pale moon

    Craving your touch on my skin
    Like the calling for blood , Feasting on flesh

    Stroke my ego its so fluffy ,
    Look deep into my burning eyes

    Passion , Longing
    Burning desire , Transforming.(..me)

    This inner beast to a cuddle play toy
    You tame my demon ,
    This beastly thing

    No need for the leash ,
    When you hold my heart strings

    Master of my corrupted soul
    Loyal to you Forever more

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