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    dots Submission Name: Wingsdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWingsdots
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    Slowly but surely,
    I am improving.
    I am rising from the ashes.
    My fire is beginning to burn again,
    My wings are blazing above me.
    Waiting for the rest of me to catch up.
    You see,
    I told you that you could knock me down,
    But I will always get back up.
    I was bleeding out the mouth,
    Dying on the ground,
    But I wont stay down.
    Not until I'm buried underground.




    Submitted on 2014-01-12 20:17:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Beautifully written...keep pushin on
    | Posted on 2014-02-01 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      kinda cool
    | Posted on 2014-01-24 00:00:00 | by michaeldreams | [ Reply to This ]


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