Night Dreaming

Author: DaleP ASL Info:    57/M/TX Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 632 /554 /330 Words: 55

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Night Dreaming

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When all the world is sleeping                          And the stars are shining                          Just because they're bright                          I lay awake night dreaming                          Watching you adrift on moonlight                          Dancing the hours away                          leaving glowing fields of freshly                          Enchanted flowers                          Where come the brand new day                           The dream spirits                          Of laughing children                          love to come and play

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First of all, the picture fits the mood of the poem. I love the simplicity of words and the hopeful vibe to this.

| Posted on 2014-04-10 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]

Very nice and a very nice pic as well. Lloyd

| Posted on 2014-01-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

Wonderfully simple and beautiful Dale. I commend you! Bruce

| Posted on 2014-01-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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