This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -

Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Night Dreaming

Author: DaleP
ASL Info:    57/M/TX
Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 632 /554 /330
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 1650
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 2193


Night Dreaming

                         When all the world is sleeping
                         And the stars are shining
                         Just because they're bright
                         I lay awake night dreaming
                         Watching you adrift on moonlight
                         Dancing the hours away
                         leaving glowing fields of freshly
                         Enchanted flowers
                         Where come the brand new day
                          The dream spirits
                         Of laughing children
                         love to come and play

Submitted on 2014-01-14 10:05:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  First of all, the picture fits the mood of the poem. I love the simplicity of words and the hopeful vibe to this.
| Posted on 2014-04-10 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nice and a very nice pic as well.

| Posted on 2014-01-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  Wonderfully simple and beautiful Dale. I commend you!

| Posted on 2014-01-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?