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    dots Submission Name: Night Dreamingdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsNight Dreamingdots
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                             When all the world is sleeping
                             And the stars are shining
                             Just because they're bright
                             I lay awake night dreaming
                             Watching you adrift on moonlight
                             Dancing the hours away
                             leaving glowing fields of freshly
                             Enchanted flowers
                             Where come the brand new day
                              The dream spirits
                             Of laughing children
                             love to come and play




    Submitted on 2014-01-14 10:05:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      First of all, the picture fits the mood of the poem. I love the simplicity of words and the hopeful vibe to this.
    | Posted on 2014-04-10 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice and a very nice pic as well.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2014-01-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Wonderfully simple and beautiful Dale. I commend you!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-01-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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