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    dots Submission Name: Haunting Smile ©™dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 264
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 686
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    Bytes: 1490



    Description:
       This was about an Ex .... :/


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    dotsHaunting Smile ©™dots
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    You're smile is just a faded memory
    but why does it keep haunting me ?

    I Said to many things, I spilled out my soul
    Only to just to let you see me go

    you broke my heart , I got scared
    So I ran away

    It's been 3 years since that day

    You were all i could think about
    I missed it so much , Every single touch

    That smile that melted my heart
    Here I thought we promised ,
    To never be apart

    I gave you my love to borrow
    But you just gave it away

    You love anther , I'm sad to say,
    you don't even feel the same way

    I want you to be happy
    Even if she's not me , I'm still not sorry ,
    this feeling can't leave

    I thought we were ment to be
    I'm not angry , i'm not mad

    I'd like to take back time &
    Turn it back ....

    To the days i still had you around
    I would of said how much I cared

    How much i loved the golden flakes of
    sun in your hair

    you're eyes that glimmered the pale
    ocean deep & blue

    How much to me , you mean to me
    it's very true , I just wish
    you could only see

    But now you will never know
    How much you mean to me



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