Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Inspiration has deserted medots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 825
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 318



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsInspiration has deserted medots
    -------------------------------------------


    Inspiration
    is elusive
    It has deserted me.
    My mind
    is a desolate desert
    that brings forth
    not one green...

    ...shoot me.

    Blood drains
    sinks into the sand.

    Death brings new life.









    Submitted on 2014-01-17 11:26:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      You seem to be saying that by letting go you can have a new start. I agree. Nice description of writer's block.
    | Posted on 2014-01-21 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I've been there before. it sucks. but just keep writing even though your inspiration has gone from you. you should be able to pull out of it.
    | Posted on 2014-01-19 00:00:00 | by brain | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198597

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    To the Epilogue written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The First Time written by Wolfwatching
    Limbo written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Blood to Plowshares written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Dirge of Nostalgia written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Search written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Can't let my demons go written by faideddarkness
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Tides of Man written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Lunch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    On Loop written by Daniel Barlow
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    Faith In Line written by MyPeriodical
    Incubus written by monad
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    This written by Chelebel
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    ME written by jjd
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Love and Solitaire written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    All Time Low written by Janesaddiction
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry