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    dots Submission Name: Inspiration has deserted medots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsInspiration has deserted medots
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    Inspiration
    is elusive
    It has deserted me.
    My mind
    is a desolate desert
    that brings forth
    not one green...

    ...shoot me.

    Blood drains
    sinks into the sand.

    Death brings new life.









    Submitted on 2014-01-17 11:26:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You seem to be saying that by letting go you can have a new start. I agree. Nice description of writer's block.
    | Posted on 2014-01-21 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I've been there before. it sucks. but just keep writing even though your inspiration has gone from you. you should be able to pull out of it.
    | Posted on 2014-01-19 00:00:00 | by brain | [ Reply to This ]


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