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    dots Submission Name: yearning oblivion (revised)dots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       How to wish for the cold to pass and perhaps be able to appreciate the warmth of the Sun. For until we really know the things that our human understanding cannot fathom, finally be revealed on what it was all really for...


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    Slowly elevate myself below...
    There's peace with hiding
    As an astronaut has a slow-motion moment
    There are stars in the darkness.
    Yet, we cannot fathom, what darkness truly is
    It seduces many to feel despondent.
    Cut your losses.
    Here, evolve!
    Quite hated by lower animals,
    Descend and search.
    She used to sing, she's still royal.
    She once sang with a voice that stopped the Heavens.
    And, illuminated the celebrated twilight
    With a cherub's brilliance, once belonging to a the chief of angels.
    Be it the truth.
    Most exalted only to be torn down by the passage of glory.
    Until the all that have and will be had, for all the eyes to marvel at the mysterious truth with the One that holds all of everything.







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      The truth of that to me on the identity crisis. You'll find your anything right there on top when you open your nothing. The answers seem so simple, the corporeally preternatural in enigma entity, of it's the essence of evolutional principle aimed being's incarnate. The truth of this to me armed humanitarian instinct, it looks like impetus intrigue's intuitional up verve. If everyone had of tool in hand, I mean the prospects are myriad. Unfortunately, of the one that holds all of everything some of us are still gonna opt for the decadence of eventual extinction, we'll be in need of embark embargo extraditions and extraversion embezzlement euthanasia extortions, just between you and me I'm gonna opt for alluvium aloof impunity on the gambit. I'm betting it's everyone has of tool in hand, of it's the nature of sentience. Then again many of us are too emotionally oriented to relate to intellectuality even when confronted with the essence of it's empirical judicature. So there you have it, the ignorant and the decadent. Maybe I'm being entirely too optimistic in thinking I enjoyed this extrapolation of yours. Ugh,,, the overtime!!!!!! Maybe I'll get paid time and a half, God knows I could use it considering, as a man, I'm only half of the equation.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-01-18 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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