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    dots Submission Name: distance.dots

    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Perhaps that is why we feel the distance
    Even when you are only minutes away
    Or sitting in the next room.
    Because heart, the soul cannot understand distance

    They only feel the absence of you not being here.
    I cannot get through to them and explain
    That what they feel is temporary
    That soon, by walking to the next room
    I will be within arms length of you.

    The only problem is your are not minutes away
    And you are not sitting in the next room
    You are exactly 1284.1 miles away.
    And although that is not as bad as it can be
    I still feel this ache that I cannot describe.
    A pain so great that makes me break down
    From time to time..

    And as much as I try to tell myself that soon we will Be together, my brain cannot make my heart comprehend That.

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