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    dots Submission Name: Wit's Enddots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWit's Enddots
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    I wanted to live a life dependent on no one
    to live solemn and strong willed
    but I'm loaned out
    owing every soul a ransom
    tied to this life of second chances
    and it's killing me

    I had more luck with love's labor
    it was truly my saving grace
    in light of this world's nature
    of wasting seconds' earnest worth
    I'm depressed with the way
    we swallow all without savor

    Everyone keeps stressing this
    and that and those efforts
    are leaving me at wit's end
    with that I'll flee this stead
    and live with death
    inside this head instead

    Let all these words ravage me
    mentally usher in depravity
    sought in reflection
    of every broken limb
    this tree of life has pained
    still knotted at the root

    Wish not any rule but happiness
    and strive for fulfillment
    in every fiber of a passion
    until year's toll is tolerable
    and growing older lends a richness
    wisdom and contention

    Too late to start again
    and those long standing still
    who have will not impart
    their strength for another's wellness
    then every begotten thing will rot
    in the grave with which it's buried

    Tell tale hearts are left to bleed
    all pains staked for sake of burdening
    those young enough to carry weight
    and I'll grow cold with age
    you watch and wonder
    why it is I'm weary




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