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    dots Submission Name: Scorndots

    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I can feel this hate
    sharp as a glass shard
    sinking deeper in this skin
    to pierce a heart
    that's waiting

    I can't abate the sating
    way my breathing paces
    about this room with rage
    damning every quiet peace
    of mind and matter

    I can't fathom life
    without the way you twist
    the nature of my furthest reach
    and prey on every whim
    dared into action

    I counter every callous blow
    with courtesy and contemplation
    walking in every worn shoe
    tattered at the soul
    for sake of understanding

    I told you too many times
    i'd give away everything
    for sake of any dire need
    and still you strike down
    every floated hope

    No jokes left
    no smiles worn
    just a brewing anger
    at my core

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