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    dots Submission Name: Lighthouse Keeperdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 207/277/230
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 606
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    Bytes: 780



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    dotsLighthouse Keeperdots
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    I've been told too many times
    to fish the sea for catch
    and prize the art of baiting
    though I'd never last
    against a raging heart
    my own would break in waves
    as each ocean crashed ashore

    I'd rather keep this house
    full of light and help
    tradesmen steer their course
    in search of something more

    I'd rather guide the reefs
    and in shadow prove
    all danger lay in store

    Murky waters hazing hulls
    and razing ships to ground
    on jagged shoals without
    warning would be so

    All catchers lie in wait
    to save the few from risking all
    until that day I'll burn bright
    for sake of saving more




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