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    dots Submission Name: Passing Timedots

    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 265/107/53
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPassing Timedots

    Passing Time

    Life, a journey.
    Fleeting moments.
    Ticking clock.
    Entanglements lead to anguish, worries and despair.
    Plethora of pearls of wisdom and knowledge to be accrued.
    Every moment to be contemplated.
    Inner bliss to be achieved
    To enter His Realm
    To see the wonders of the Wonderful World.

    Submitted on 2014-01-26 13:57:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this piece, due to how often I think about time, myself. This write definitely catches the real concept of life, time, everything that has to do with true spirituality. I enjoyed it. It was clear -- even though the line 'Plethora of pearls of wisdom and knowledge to be accrued.' sorta threw me off in the beginning, but eventually made sense towards the end of it. I believe that's the true beauty of this; it doesn't bore and it changes directions without really leaving the road.
    Good job, favorite.
    | Posted on 2014-02-04 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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