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    dots Submission Name: His Spirit Guidesdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHis Spirit Guidesdots
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    A true friend told me once
    to fear the shadows
    the ones that turn
    away the light

    He vowed most men are false
    that treachery is subtle
    but sinks in every person
    in the end

    That to know ourselves
    is to see that in the mirror
    to be a little kinder
    to love a little dearer

    Weigh yourself in passing
    strive for balance
    clear your mind
    and thrive




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    Oh this should be me motto. Very wise and earnest. Yet easier said then done sometimes but it is the only way to zen.

    It is a pure piece and not much needs to be said.

    Brava
    Kelly
    | Posted on 2014-05-22 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]


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