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    dots Submission Name: Gesha™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Description:
       invission , moving, art ,grace


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    dotsGesha™©dots
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    Mid-day blossoms fall from the cherry tree
    Pink petals,shiny tiny, golden leaves

    Gracefully falling from the limbs of these
    A sweet smell , you see the petals float in air

    Glorious the sunset standing still in place
    Take it in this sweet scented dancing air

    Timeless is the beauty ,
    Is that what you seek ?

    A pale white painted face
    Lips stained to shame the fair red rose

    Hands soft like delicate porcelain
    Graceful balance , artist in the making

    Japanese custom , i'm not free to love
    I'm designed for entertainment
    Born dancer of the fan

    Grace & beauty forever more






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      This was very poignant,--beautifully executed. I felt the delicate beauty and the parallels between the fragile blossoms and the geisha. One little thing--you mention "mid-day blossoms"---and at the same time the "sunset standing still)--just a small thing but somehow it distracted me from the otherwise serenity and bittersweet longing described in the rest. Take care.

    | Posted on 2014-01-30 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]


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