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    dots Submission Name: ™© Valentines daydots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 696
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       This i wrote early for my love , wonder everyones thought's on this piece before i present it to him :)


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    dots™© Valentines daydots
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    Rose's are for love
    They can't hold a candle
    To what you do for me , My love

    I've thought of writing poetry
    I've thought of singing songs

    Your constantly in my head
    I'm always lost day dreaming
    Of wonderful things i'm always feeling

    Your soft & cuddly
    You're my personal teddy bear

    You're arms that hold me tight
    Even late through-out the night

    Don't swear by the inconstant moon
    Don't promise me the stars

    Just stay by my side , say'll you'll be there
    But most of all show you care

    I don't need chocolates
    I don't need candy

    Just you're hand in mine makes me randy
    I love you dearly, you make me so giddy

    My dearest a poem for you ,
    With words so sweet just like you


    Happy valentines day












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