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Lifes Game


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 151
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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Lifes Game



Why do you hide?
I just wonder
Why?
Why not accept who you are?
Why not just play your part?
In this game you'll find yourself
Although it'll probably put you through hell
Just keep pushing on
Never go back
But if you do
You'll undergo an attack
And not one you can win
Its just a simple fact
This battle against yourself
Can be lost just like that
Think long and hard
About what you do
Because you could lose
With just one wrong move

Funny how in the end
Everyone seems to be your friend
But your still to weary
To accept and let them in
Be smart when you start
This game can be fatal
It just reminds me
That we are
Like the most precious petal
Of the most beautiful flower
And we will all just wither away
With each passing hour...




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  This was so beautifully written, and then i read the last 6 lines and thought. This is amazing. Great job T, you smashed it outta the park with this homerun.
| Posted on 2014-02-04 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful..
| Posted on 2014-02-03 00:00:00 | by Priyaa | [ Reply to This ]


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