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    dots Submission Name: to whom I lovedots
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    Author: PrincessByYou
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    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
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    dotsto whom I lovedots
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    To whom i love so very dearly,
    why have you gone so very quickly?
    My chest is in agony from so much hollowness for I miss you with every breath.
    Without you I am lost living in the past, the sun, the moon have never been so glum.
    I will never forget, you i will always cherish.
    To whom I love i will never let go.




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