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to whom I love


Author: PrincessByYou
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Class/Type: Poetry /You left me
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to whom I love


To whom i love so very dearly,
why have you gone so very quickly?
My chest is in agony from so much hollowness for I miss you with every breath.
Without you I am lost living in the past, the sun, the moon have never been so glum.
I will never forget, you i will always cherish.
To whom I love i will never let go.




Submitted on 2014-02-04 11:45:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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