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Author:	kyserin
ASL Info:	30's/Female/ohio
Elite Ratio:	3.67 - 44/25/52
Words:	116

Class/Type:	Poetry/Romance
Total Views:	1104
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Everyday it's coming true,
You're falling for me , I'm falling for you

I can only tell you , what you mean to me

Please , Please , see that it's true
( this heart that beats only for you )

It's true , I would be lost , I'd be nothing
without you

If It's an endless dream , Please ( don't wake me )
Or is this dejavu , ( feelings we are reliving )

I can't Stop myself from loving you
Head over heels , kissing the sky

Your the only reason I need , This is why....

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