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    dots Submission Name: ™© Why...dots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dots™© Why...dots

    Everyday it's coming true,
    You're falling for me , I'm falling for you

    I can only tell you , what you mean to me

    Please , Please , see that it's true
    ( this heart that beats only for you )

    It's true , I would be lost , I'd be nothing
    without you

    If It's an endless dream , Please ( don't wake me )
    Or is this dejavu , ( feelings we are reliving )

    I can't Stop myself from loving you
    Head over heels , kissing the sky

    Your the only reason I need , This is why....

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