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    dots Submission Name: THOSE WORDSdots
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    Author: Apoetwcloudenvy
    Elite Ratio:    1.44 - 6/9/10
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsTHOSE WORDSdots
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    Those words
    Words that spin around my head
    Those words
    Words spoken ever so softly
    Those words
    That sent a sensation from my head to my feet
    Yep those word
    Words so inspirational
    Word heavy with feelings
    Yep because those words you spoke still linger from that encounter
    An encounter vivified with a mixture of word play infused with a deep level lust and infatuation
    Just know those word inspired this a mini glimpse of an aftermath of those spoken words




    Submitted on 2014-02-05 21:50:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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