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    dots Submission Name: Expletivedots
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    Author: Draigon
    ASL Info:    25/m/Al
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 164/196/91
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsExpletivedots
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    Forces build,
    and the urge to say
    take yourself away
    into the night,
    don't let the light
    of day shine bright
    on you...grows strong

    Get out of sight,
    out of mind...
    Tomorrow I'll no longer be there,
    today my love you won't find
    My house isn't open for you
    I resend my offer
    keep your hands away
    its my coffer

    All of this poetic bull shit,
    to keep this anger lit...
    sustain the fit
    of rage and passion
    No, this isn't a new fashion...
    However, if you insist
    I must enlist
    the dictionary of the crude
    Fuck off and fuck you




    Submitted on 2014-02-08 00:24:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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