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    dots Submission Name: Silver Lining's Playbookdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSilver Lining's Playbookdots
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    Business lately has been trying
    I stick out like a sore thumb
    always struggling to fit in
    never normal enough
    to work well with others.

    Still feel like a bother
    some burden of emotion
    held too tight with the fear
    of bringing you down with me
    stuck sinking with the ship.

    This soul is a patchwork
    banded over a silent plea
    begging for acceptance
    I'm left holding hands
    with myself.

    I've worn this heart bare
    with the friction of existing
    suffering in search of
    the silver lining sewn
    between these seams




    Submitted on 2014-02-08 21:18:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this may seem abstract but I applaud your efforts to create your own silver lining.
    | Posted on 2014-02-08 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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