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Submission Name: It is Time dots

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Author:	my shadow
Elite Ratio:	4.82 - 291/150/48
Words:	79

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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Description:
love poem

It is Time dots

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Could there ever be
a better time than now,
to be in love and to make love.

Put down your burdens,
unpin your clothes,
lie down, lay with me.

Tomorrow and all the following tomorrows
we will be happy in love
in a timeless place of our own.

When all of the tomorrows are yesterdays
there will still be no better time than now,
to be in love and to make love.

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