It is Time

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It is Time

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Could there ever be a better time than now, to be in love and to make love. Put down your burdens, unpin your clothes, lie down, lay with me. Tomorrow and all the following tomorrows we will be happy in love in a timeless place of our own. When all of the tomorrows are yesterdays there will still be no better time than now, to be in love and to make love.

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