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    dots Submission Name: There is no better timedots
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    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       love poem


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    dotsThere is no better timedots
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    Come close so we may hold each other;
    There is no better time than now
    for being in love and making love.

    Put down your burdens,
    take off your clothes,
    lie down, and lay with me.

    Tomorrow and all those following tomorrows,
    we will return to this place of ours
    to be ever happy together.

    When all of our tomorrows are yesterdays
    we will have memories
    of loving each day.




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