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    dots Submission Name: It is Timedots
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    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       love poem


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    dotsIt is Timedots
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    Could there ever be
    a better time than now,
    to be in love and to make love.

    Put down your burdens,
    unpin your clothes,
    lie down, lay with me.

    Tomorrow and all the following tomorrows
    we will be happy in love
    in a timeless place of our own.

    When all of the tomorrows are yesterdays
    there will still be no better time than now,
    to be in love and to make love.





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