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    dots Submission Name: Suicidedots

    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I don't care
    It's just there
    It's not fair
    A dare
    They stare
    It's wrong
    Too long
    A sad song
    To belong
    Bring along
    No one
    Just begun
    Not fun
    A friend
    Not again
    The end

    Submitted on 2014-02-11 20:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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