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    dots Submission Name: Suicidedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/65/84
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSuicidedots
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    Suicide
    I don't care
    It's just there
    It's not fair
    A dare
    They stare
    Suicide
    It's wrong
    Too long
    A sad song
    To belong
    Bring along
    Suicide
    No one
    Someone
    Anyone
    Just begun
    Not fun
    Suicide
    Pretend
    A friend
    Unmend
    Not again
    The end




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