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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 740
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    Description:
       i'm an empath here me Rawr


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    I'm not sad,
    i want to weep & weep some more ,
    Tears of joy will fall to the floor

    Could it be i'm starting to find my place ?
    Salty tears of joy falling down my face

    The gleaming light starting to show
    It can't even be covered by the snow

    Strength from within ,buried so deep
    Feeling it rise from inside of me

    Knowledge I seek , it's there , laying deep
    Waiting to be found ,

    Now on this path , starting a new
    Finding myself at last with hope renewed




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