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    dots Submission Name: Raindots
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    Author: hazeleyes28
    Elite Ratio:    1.46 - 1/5/4
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsRaindots
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    There are days when the rain
    calms and soothes,
    and days when
    it depresses and moves.
    Today its wet and cold.
    I love the rain,
    it cleanses my thoughts
    and helps me mold.
    It washes away all the bad,
    and brings a new reflection.
    sometimes though it makes me sad.
    It reminds me of happier times
    and other rainy days
    just like this one,
    in so many ways.
    Like playing in the puddles
    and watching the sky darken
    as more rain begins to fall
    and the clouds are so grey.
    Beautiful day
    wonderful rain.





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      I felt like a child again, looking out the window at the rain. Nice poem. Good work. Keep it up!

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    | Posted on 2014-02-17 00:00:00 | by SnapT | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem. How rain can be good and bad. I love your first four lines they rhythmically flow so well. :)
    | Posted on 2014-02-17 00:00:00 | by She Is Insane | [ Reply to This ]

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