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    dots Submission Name: ©™ First Lovedots

    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 639
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       About a past love , that still randomly reminisces

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    dots©™ First Lovedots

    I never wanted to let this go
    But there were just some things

    That you finally needed to know

    For a time you were mine ,
    you held my heart in your hands

    Now i'm a puddle on the floor
    I never came clean,

    I never got the chance to say
    what it meant to me

    Time cant't turn back, only moves forward
    I love anther , he's good to me

    But my feelings for you , still live in me
    Today i let it go, The tears feel down my face

    A sigh of relief now lives in it's place
    First love i'll never forget your face

    Or the way you filled up an empty space
    A lost little girl , that found true love

    A rebel on a bike ,right after junior high
    Those deepest brown eyes , getting lost in a trace

    The warmest heart that could melt any Ice
    The day i seen you cry , torn my world apart

    I felt it was my place to heal your heart
    Arms with warmth a strong embrace

    It still feels like yesterday, these memories
    Still hold this place , My heart still beats

    It misses you, I've confessed
    All these feelings to you

    First love where does it go from here
    There are still so many things
    Left unsaid here ....

    Submitted on 2014-02-13 11:47:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh I really liked your poem. I wish this is how my first love felt about me because if he did, I would run back to him but I would never know. I liked your poem because it's relatable and because I am also emotionally connected to it.
    I just have a little suggestion: I would recommends to place a comma after warmth.

    Arms with warmth a strong embrace

    Otherwise good poem! Keep
    Up the good work
    | Posted on 2014-02-17 00:00:00 | by She Is Insane | [ Reply to This ]

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