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Are you scared?
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Are you scared?
I dreamt of you again last night
You asked what I was so afraid of
Because I was tossing and turning in my sleep
I told you I wasn't scared
But you knew it wasn't all it seemed.
I've been lying through my teeth
I know that you are living in my head now
Taken up residence among my insecurities
It's sometimes nice to hear your voice though
Reminding me of who I could be
It's getting hard to keep up this charade
When every step is a leap
And you keep reminding me how scary a leap could be
I know you are doing well now
And I am not asking for your sympathy
You were my best friend once
I wonder if that's now only in my dreams.
Submitted on 2014-02-15 10:05:03
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I like the way you set a poem out, it shows you have a good control over language.
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