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Are you scared?

Author: blankscreen
ASL Info:    22/f/NY
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Are you scared?

I dreamt of you again last night
You asked what I was so afraid of
Because I was tossing and turning in my sleep

I told you I wasn't scared
But you knew it wasn't all it seemed.
I've been lying through my teeth

I know that you are living in my head now
Taken up residence among my insecurities
It's sometimes nice to hear your voice though
Reminding me of who I could be

It's getting hard to keep up this charade
When every step is a leap
And you keep reminding me how scary a leap could be
I know you are doing well now
And I am not asking for your sympathy

You were my best friend once
I wonder if that's now only in my dreams.

Submitted on 2014-02-15 10:05:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the way you set a poem out, it shows you have a good control over language.
| Posted on 2014-07-09 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]

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