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Writer's Block


Author: TheStillSilence
ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
Elite Ratio:    4.97 - 180 /113 /59
Words: 1
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Writer's Block







Submitted on 2014-02-24 23:42:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Silver said it all. I'll just add my excellent - you sublimely touch emotion. - Jim
| Posted on 2014-03-04 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  Loved this!--easy to relate to as it is written with such sincerity and conviction. Beautiful imagery conveys well the loss of motivation , the loss of dreams, the helpless emptiness --- simply but effectively. My favorite was the two lines repeated at the start and end of the poem, "i miss the way you lingered
at the edge of my conscious"---and also the contrasti of emotions in those two verses. Well done
Silver
| Posted on 2014-02-25 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]


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