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    dots Submission Name: We Are Medots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWe Are Medots
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    Connected.
    You and I.
    Even though...
    You don't know me...
    And I don't know you...
    We are together.
    Have been since we were born.
    Same date.
    Same time.
    Same mom.
    Same dad.
    And we can never be apart.
    No matter what is thrown at us.
    We may not see each other much but...
    I look at you everyday.
    Just like you look at me.
    We are one in the same my friend.
    Cause guess what?
    I am you.
    You are me.
    We.
    Are me.




    Submitted on 2014-02-27 21:56:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Zeth
    | Posted on 2014-03-07 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm, I have no idea what this poem is about? I don't know if that's how it's supposed to be?
    | Posted on 2014-03-06 00:00:00 | by duawrites | [ Reply to This ]


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