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    dots Submission Name: My Lullaby dots
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    Author: MmR
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    dotsMy Lullaby dots
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    ~And here I lay singing
    My own homemade lullaby~

    ..Sobbing heaven
    Sobbing heaven
    Sigh, Sigh, Sigh..

    You have made
    The me that I've come to be
    A hidden mess of insanity
    A walking complication
    That will never let it be
    Never let it go
    Never let it show

    ~And I'll dance to my own lullaby~

    ..Sobbing heaven
    Sobbing heaven
    Sigh, Sigh, Sigh..

    And I'll never let you go
    I'll never let you go
    Loving you for forever
    Losing you for always
    Scars I'll never show

    ~And my soul will cry it's lullaby~

    ..Sobbing heaven
    Sobbing heaven
    Sigh, Sigh, Sigh











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      why write a lullaby for the soul? Sarah... who is this you? if you need to talk i'm on fb alot. just so you know. i've been wrapped up in alot of busy complicated stuff. but if somethings going on i can at the very least listen. or you can send me goofy comment on here just for some random fun.
    | Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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