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    dots Submission Name: Consider the Appledots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
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    dotsConsider the Appledots
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    [I]"but of the fruit of the tree which is in the midst of the garden, God has said..." Genesis 3:3 [/I],


    Crimson, green or golden shine
    Slick appeal - we touched it
    Hungry for its secret, its scent
    The seed, the core, the pulp, the skin.
    John Chapman, you fed destiny
    On the seeds of the Rambo tree
    Fed us on dumplings, fritters, sauce, cobbler
    Turnovers, butter, cake, cider
    How we clamored for a slice
    Of that pie in the sky
    The Apple Corps, the Apple Store
    The Beatles spinning round and round
    Fiona. Gwyneth - your daughter
    Apple headed, apple cheeked -
    We gobbled them all
    Sweet juice dripping from our chins.
    Oh Eve, we understand!




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      A very apt ode to the forbidden fruit.....

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2014-09-20 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Is it possible that we're all fruit nuerotic and that's why we eat junk food? ugh sorry, had to get that out. anywho. yes, eve, we understand. Amen. cuz how many times do we give those to EVE? You'd think the mother of humanity would be most revered.
    | Posted on 2014-05-28 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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