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    dots Submission Name: LETSdots
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    Author: Apoetwcloudenvy
    Elite Ratio:    1.44 - 6/9/10
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    Description:
       Inspired by Elijah Blake - Runnin Blind


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    dotsLETSdots
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    So Lets
    Just let go and experience the uncontrollable
    Lets just walk towards this thing call love
    A road pave by our internal desires
    So Now
    Lets allow our souls to resonate together until perfect harmony is obtained

    Because
    This minute this second this day
    We have achieve a moment of
    Moving towards something special
    A moment prewritten
    As result of us letting go and experiencing
    This thing call love




    Submitted on 2014-03-05 18:23:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The past two comments reverberate what I wanted to say, besides that fact I find it exhilarating as new love always is

    Cheers

    ps
    very cool name yo! Nice one!

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2014-05-28 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      Is lets a decision or an ultimatum? And what does reason have to do with it? Don't leave room for doubt. Seize the moment. :) beautifully expressed.
    -vlad 09
    | Posted on 2014-03-14 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2014-03-14 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
      The poem has potential but there are a few grammatical errors that take away from it. Also the flow is hard to follow and the rhythm unclear, it could help to either use punctuation or break the lines downa bit more.

    In my humble opinion. - DuaWrites
    | Posted on 2014-03-06 00:00:00 | by duawrites | [ Reply to This ]


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