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    dots Submission Name: Spoken Worddots

    Author: duawrites
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 3/3/4
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A short piece on spoken word.

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    dotsSpoken Worddots

    Ladies and gentlemen close your eyes and come on a trip with me
    Just clear your mind and let my poetry set you free
    We’re gonna go on a metaphorical word journey

    I could take you to Paris, France or even Spain
    Walk you through a heart attack’s chest pain
    Or let’s be ants and experience the bottom of the food chain

    We could sing, dance, or duel to the death
    Design a beautiful boquet out of baby’s breath
    We could visit Shakespeare and talk to McBeth

    There are no limits, no brick roads, no ends in sight
    A beautiful ocean veiw sun rise to your right
    And to the left, destruction, despair, war-lit night

    We could take a walk on the sands of Arabia
    Farm the fertile crescent of mesopatemia
    Actually, let’s visit the vampires in Romania

    Or have you ever had to wait, forever, just wait
    One second, 5 minutes, 3 hours, tick tock, tick tock
    On the face of the biggest oxymoron clock

    But, we certainly don’t have to stop there
    We should walk on a skull without hair!
    I mean we could literally go anywhere

    Because – this is poetry
    The language I speak
    And in the words of a fellow poet:

    “I am not a rapper, I am not rapping
    I am not a singer, I am not singing
    I’m justa girl that likes to rhyme while she’s talking”

    I am a poet and this is – spoken word
    *snap – snap – snap*

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