Holy wow. I think I've found a favorite. I haven't had one in a long while on here :P
I like how this tells a story, you can actually see these things happen as you read. I think the double meaning as well :D This almost seems from both perceptions (the man and the woman in the poem) and how each of them view each other as a monstrosity of sorts.
Seriously, Bravo on this. I honestly can say this is almost as great as my favorite persons on here and I'm biased towards that mans work as it is :P