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    Author: Bengt
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/2/21
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Candle flame doth gently sway
    Conjures demon usually kept at bay
    Lover’s felo de se shines bright as moon
    She knows timing is far too soon

    Shriek of hungry vixens surround
    She runs to him on frozen ground
    Barefoot beneath does not chill
    the hunt to have desired kill

    He pulls heavy curtains tight
    Blocks out ever descending night
    Clawing at window ‘til her hands bleed
    He still does not feel her desperate need

    Circling owl then descends, scratching skin
    Swooping and tearing the rotten flesh within
    Picking, consuming, in all of the glory
    Each poisonous piece has its own story

    He drifts, he wakes, he repeatedly stirs
    She punishes him for not being hers
    Never again will he peacefully sleep
    She claims him every night to keep

    Grateful for the morning dawn
    he grows ever paler and deathly drawn
    She secretes the exorcism to set him free
    Bound in her heart for him never to see




    Submitted on 2014-03-06 10:24:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Holy wow. I think I've found a favorite. I haven't had one in a long while on here :P

    I like how this tells a story, you can actually see these things happen as you read. I think the double meaning as well :D This almost seems from both perceptions (the man and the woman in the poem) and how each of them view each other as a monstrosity of sorts.

    Seriously, Bravo on this. I honestly can say this is almost as great as my favorite persons on here and I'm biased towards that mans work as it is :P

    ~Nikki
    | Posted on 2014-03-07 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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