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    dots Submission Name: The madness got to you too?dots
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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 41/55/47
    Words: 44
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    dotsThe madness got to you too?dots
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    My hearts heavy.lifting others up yet I ache
    In my bones in my soul and for the things I refuse to take
    its a selfish life as we try to find
    the one who'll wander in
    unforbid our sunken desires
    we warily hide.




    Submitted on 2014-03-06 23:21:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the title of this, and its absolutely true. The madness of heartbreak is an ongoing, infectious thing. But thats what the good times are for right. Nothing really to nitpick at so great job and keep writing!

    Kase
    | Posted on 2014-06-02 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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