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    dots Submission Name: Rememberdots

    Author: Wonderwords
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       I just remembered a time when my sister and I got a fit of the giggles when we were young

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    For Eilis Ni Chadhain-O’Loughlin
    Remember you and I,
    Looking at Bully’s red face,
    Aghaidh dearg,
    Looking at each other,
    And bursting into laughter,
    “Is your father at home?”
    We could not answer,
    Because we were giggling too much,
    No Gael Linn tickets were sold that day,
    And we laughed many more times,
    Down through the years,
    We appreciated Bully,
    Challenging the priest from the altar,
    Insisting his case could only he heard,
    By a Gaeilge speaking Court,
    And loving his tarbh ailing*
    His mathair and his madra*
    Patriotic, stubborn and strong,
    Making us gaggle and giggle
    All summer long,
    As only young cailíní can,
    Gáire, grá saol with rubicund Bully,
    In rural, rustic, GARR.

    Ailing = beautiful
    Mathair = mother
    Tarbh ailing = beautiful bull
    Madra = dog
    Aghaidh dearg = red face

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