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Flip Personalities


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 51
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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Flip Personalities



Im just a shadow
Nothing more
So let my body
Hit the floor
Pack your bags
Get out the door
Im not your shadow
Anymore...

Im just a girl
Nothing more
So let me love
Forevermore
Set your bags
Upon the floor
Come on in
And close the door...




Submitted on 2014-03-07 17:43:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  A story of the never-ending cycles love can often bring into our world. The feeling of circles, and the routine and often roulette of our individual quests for love. I feel for ya kid!
| Posted on 2014-04-01 00:00:00 | by Zanitystar | [ Reply to This ]
  I like how the first and second verses totally contradict each other. The first, is the end of something, while the second is a new beginning.
| Posted on 2014-03-30 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
  What made you write this curious? This reminds me of a time in my life.
| Posted on 2014-03-22 00:00:00 | by Apoetwcloudenvy | [ Reply to This ]


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