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    dots Submission Name: Flip Personalitiesdots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsFlip Personalitiesdots

    Im just a shadow
    Nothing more
    So let my body
    Hit the floor
    Pack your bags
    Get out the door
    Im not your shadow

    Im just a girl
    Nothing more
    So let me love
    Set your bags
    Upon the floor
    Come on in
    And close the door...

    Submitted on 2014-03-07 17:43:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A story of the never-ending cycles love can often bring into our world. The feeling of circles, and the routine and often roulette of our individual quests for love. I feel for ya kid!
    | Posted on 2014-04-01 00:00:00 | by Zanitystar | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how the first and second verses totally contradict each other. The first, is the end of something, while the second is a new beginning.
    | Posted on 2014-03-30 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      What made you write this curious? This reminds me of a time in my life.
    | Posted on 2014-03-22 00:00:00 | by Apoetwcloudenvy | [ Reply to This ]

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