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Eternity Is Just A Dream


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /You left me
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Eternity Is Just A Dream



Too good to be true
For me this is you
Loving
Caring
And so very sweet
Its hard to believe
That its all just for me
Its like your a dream
From which I dont want to leave
And in this dream
Its just you and me
Together forever
In our own little world
Then I awaken
And from you I am pulled
Until you drive up
And brighten my day
With the sweet little kisses
And things that you say
'Ill always love you,
And with you Ill stay.'
I wanna be
Wrapped in your arms
For all eternity...
Too bad...
Its all just a dream...




Submitted on 2014-03-07 17:49:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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