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    dots Submission Name: Unrequiteddots
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    Author: moaxcym
    ASL Info:    23/m/Pakistan
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 155/196/85
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsUnrequiteddots
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    I loved pretty things.
    She loved expensive ones.
    We were never really in love!




    Submitted on 2014-03-09 04:28:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      in the biologics of love
    prerequisites matter
    of course you were in love
    but not with each other...

    Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2015-12-22 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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