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    dots Submission Name: Endlessdots
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    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    21/F/Nocturne
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 95/166/107
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEndlessdots
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    I am a waking dream
    a dreaming life
    hypnagogia
    incandescent
    transcendent by accident
    dark light
    over and over
    distillation of the soul
    eclipse of the ego
    out of body
    no mind
    all that is
    flows through me

    I am endless

    and

    so are you




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