A Moment Away

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A Moment Away

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She doesn't really know my name Yet there he is wanting... He doesn't see me smile at him Yet there she is wondering... In the blink of an eye It could all pass them by Love is Nothing more Love is Simply so Before the moment's end Let her see you notice her... ...and tell him you know his name Fall and be caught And live...

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Whoa, I had only days ago been wondering about this. I must agree, for sure, that one forms his own destiny; however, I also believe fate has its natural cause. I wish I had taken more risk in my life, I admit. Too many nervous ticks, a little bit (a lot) of anxiety and bam - opportunity = taken for granted. Thanks, I guess...for making me realize I've gotta work on my social skills or else be lonely and bitter; in constant regret.

| Posted on 2014-10-08 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

A moment can slip away only if we let it. I enjoyed this.

| Posted on 2014-04-10 00:00:00 | by quicksorrow | [ Reply to This ]

"For all sad words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these, “It might have been.” John Greenleaf Whittier- Reminds me of this quote,--we have all been there, and (not) done that--- "if only----" two little words that generate hours of wistful thoughts--- Silver

| Posted on 2014-03-16 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]

Aww this is so cute and true! If you dont go for it youll never know what couldve been.

| Posted on 2014-03-14 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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