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    dots Submission Name: The Cutdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 814
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    Bytes: 409



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    dotsThe Cutdots
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    Only few who personally know me
    Know just how deep this cut goes
    The true depths of the cut
    You only get a little time between a cut and knowing how deep it is
    If its just going go leave you nicked,
    or disfigured forever.
    All you can do is try and stretch out that moment for as long as you possibly can
    Cause once you know, there ain't no coming back




    Submitted on 2014-03-17 20:51:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it's true. by the time we know the extent of damage we're already victims.
    | Posted on 2014-07-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds graphic in a way, but the write it self seems like life to me, maybe venturing into someone, taking a chance, I like the depth of the write, pretty cool really
    | Posted on 2014-04-04 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]


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