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Untitled Fears


Author: duawrites
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Words: 33
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Untitled Fears



Every night
My eyes fight
For relief

From my fears
Of loss
And loneliness

Every night
I whimper
In my sleep

As my fears
Trickle into
Even
my dreams




Submitted on 2014-03-17 21:31:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  So true. Everybody goes through this phase at some point in their lives. It is very tough situation. Only distraction and confidence in yourself to face the adverse situation can help in alleviating this phase.
| Posted on 2014-03-23 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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