With a little less angst and unreasonable rhyming couplets this would make a nice song lyric, beyond that personally it sounds like something I would write down, feel bad about later and tear up and throw away.
Wonder what your main point is here... not lol obvious...pretty sure in the first line you meant bed and i personally think your second line would flow better if you put 'screaming in my head'
take out i guess in the sixth line
take out on in the eighth line
no idea how to fix nine and ten
in line 12 instead of we are id put we're
idk just a suggestion...i think itd flow better that way....maybe not. idk