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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: Hell039sAngel
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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       Wrote this about someone who is beautiful in the most wonderful of ways, distance can really cripple communication.

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    I'm afraid
    Afraid to open the pages
    Of this book that I've waited
    So long to read
    I'm fragile
    When faded
    I get the courage
    To admit its
    like Armageddon.
    I can't risk an apocalypse.

    I'm fragile.
    I'm strong,
    But I'm weak.
    I care..
    I want to be there,
    But I'm here.

    The distance keeps me guessing
    I hate puzzles,
    And surprises.
    You only see so much of who I am
    In black and white Snapshots
    Of thoughts
    On a screen.
    I'm in between..
    Love and pain
    And I'm afraid
    To admit it.
    So please don't make me regret this..

    I love you

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